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Mimi 🫶's avatar

‘Until you’ve fixed the sink yourself, a place can’t know loving’ I got chills, this is brilliant!!!

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Jonny Franklin's avatar

Love this, such great wording. You definitely have a way to word with emotions

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Vana's avatar

This one is like reading a melody!!

I love Word Soup. Each poem brims with flavor and soul! ❤️👏

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Kate O. Digon's avatar

A house is not a home until I have cried my heart out in every room and smelled the scent of safety.

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Julia-Paz's avatar

I read it out loud because the flow is like a babbling brook; smooth in some places and bumpy in others.

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For Those Who Drown by Aasha's avatar

Really looking forward to your poetry collection

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EDMCPAUL's avatar

Nice

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Mira_Writes's avatar

excellent

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Zach's avatar

This one’s my fave so far <3

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Jenny Rose's avatar

I was going to highlight a few lines but I can’t pick, because I love the whole piece. Beautiful imagery in this poem.

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